NaruVPein-Koi-The last straw

This is a sketch i have drawn Of Naru [supernovedobe] from Koi cosplay. Its from the photo "The Last Straw" and i've tried to dramaticise it (is that even a word, Dramaticise?) I hope you like it... it really is just a quick sketch cos i dont sleep. It is now 1.23AM London time on 23/8/10, and i'm not the least bit sleepy so i think i will be drawing a few more pics for yall XD I'm liking how it came out though Naru's leg looks spazzy. I wanted to put some trees and stuff in the background but i could decide where the horizon should be, and well like this it kinda looks like an endless battle field... maybe?

I'm not sure if i will colour it or line art it or just leave it as it is.

Is it just me or does something about this just scream MINATO at you?

Thankyou for looking please comment away i looove your feedbacks and even critisisms on how i could make it better XD

please i dont mind you complaining if my Americanisms are bad and wrong. I'm trying to put in a few cos i've had complaints on blog spots because they dont get half of what i'm rambling bout. but then again i dont get what i'm on about half the time.